I still have a little trouble with the faces in panels two and three. It is as if you didn't pay as much attention to them or give them as much time because they are not the hero. I still admire your use of lighting to create focal points. Your attention to the backgrounds, perspective, and detial is also very good (I love the hair on Logan's arm). I also enjoy that you vary the shots, from long shot, to medium closeup, slowly getting closer in to the faces as the action intensifies.
Hey I think you did an excelent job with the layout design into frames works great and man I really like the way u do the details and wicked job with the colors the light effects kick butt! dats real hard to get just right!!